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5/11/24, 2:04 AM
When will this wonderful story continue? I hope new chapters will be released soon or is there somewhere else I can read them?

5/11/24, 5:46 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I apprecaite that you enjoyed it and are looking forward to the next chapter. I promise I haven't forgotten about it and have begun work on it. It got paused because of some real life stuff and commissions. But rest assured it'll be completed. There's nowhere to read subsequent chapters yet but the proceeding chapters are all on GSS (https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10003225 and my AO3 https://archiveofourown.org/users/fanboi214/works)
5/11/24, 3:14 PM
Really interesting start! Funny how Liam was the one telling them not to split up, but then he gets affected first by the hypnosis when he splits off from the group.
5/9/24, 7:14 PM
I don't understand why Roy has to sell his body for the team. Why him and only him? Why does the team need money for someone's baby? A few plot points left unexplained. I know it's a fantasy but I'm curious.

5/11/24, 10:20 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Haha yeah, the plot is not that strong I admit... But he got her pregnant so it's like his way of paying back for the scandal/getting funds for the teams because of his actions... In my head it works. It's kind of explained at the beginning but you're right, I should make things clearer from now on

5/11/24, 1:47 PM
@[SoftBoiBuns](/user/show/10033233) That's fine. I was curious why he had to sell his body. Thanks.
Anonymous
5/11/24, 5:39 AM
As I was following the story I'd find myself getting lost into it and just nodding and getting more excited. Almost as if I were Alex and I went into a trance taking in the Doctor's programming. Had to re-read after that and it only got stronger. Can't wait to read more and more

5/11/24, 12:03 PM
@Anonymous Good boy! Perfect, part of my intention is for readers to experience Dr. Jonathan's power in them too.
5/11/24, 8:07 AM
Loved this chapter! Would love for brian to make good on his threat to make Riley forget tyler, just to explore more of the obedience curse (but then have someone save the day and reverse it)
5/11/24, 7:59 AM
Uh oh. Gotta be careful what you say in that house. I hope the house interprets that wish nicely, especially if Riley goes through with reversing the gay wish (though I hope he doesn't). Love this series and the tenderness between some of the characters. Riley's brushing off of our hero in favour of Brian was gut wrenching.
5/11/24, 7:28 AM
Great start !
5/11/24, 7:13 AM
I love the subtle control that results in the subjects realising something is wrong but not being able to place it. I'm curious to see what other sports you have in mind for the future? Maybe even some other clubs like debate too?
Seaofcolors
5/10/24, 9:42 PM
Absolutely loved this, what a hot and sexy story! Creative approach to forcible mental submission too!

5/11/24, 6:36 AM
@Seaofcolors Thank you so much!
5/11/24, 5:17 AM
Intrigued.