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4/23/24, 7:50 AM
Seriously this story is fantastic. Idk if we’re going to keep following Ian but that would be SO satisfying given the ending. Overall though, AMAZING and looking forward to more of anything.

4/24/24, 8:04 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Thank you! I've fleshed out this concept as much as I can, but there'll be more concepts to come. What did you like best with this one?

4/24/24, 8:13 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) I like the creeping feeling of embarrassment/humiliation and how it’s all wrapped in an overall pleasant exterior. Nothing is really malicious and it’s oh so satisfying to watch the main character get in way over their head, lol. The way Ian feels as if everyone is staring at him is fantastic. Also love how the change isn’t permanent but it lasts a pretty significant amount of time- and is essentially indistinguishable from actual male pattern baldness throughout that time frame.

Hank
4/25/24, 5:03 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) This story still has a lot of meat left in it. It could definitely use a sequel where Ian goes to the wedding, and he is forced to choose between keeping his mpb secret under the toupee, or taking it off and begging known as male pattern bald to his entire family

4/25/24, 10:16 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Ah yeah, Ian could have stopped at any point, but he didn't for reasons even he doesn't understand. Once it's done it's done, though, and now he'll have to live with it for a good while, and hope his secret isn't revealed.

4/25/24, 10:20 PM
@Hank Which do you prefer?

Hank
4/27/24, 9:52 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) I think it's hotter to see him go to the party with a toupee that looks too conservative for his style, have his brother give him grief and mess with his hair, and while his brother is messing with him, the toupee comes off of his head.
4/27/24, 5:34 PM
I hope someday you will write a story about Dean and Sam Winchester)
4/26/24, 12:52 PM
the hottest story I've read on here for quite some time. Great work!

4/27/24, 4:02 PM
@[awol](/user/show/912904) Thanks! Which aspects made it hot for you?
Anonymous
4/27/24, 3:11 PM
Wow I would of never known
4/27/24, 3:05 PM
Jack, Sir, I'm sure I echo the sentiments of many, but this brilliant story has got to be one of your BEST yet!! Clever of you to assign the diabolical doctor as a mere minor character, especially with the whole backstory/setup-- but the way you had each notorius thug take over & carefully strip/break Dick down (in each their own specific ways) was SHEER GENIUS!! BTW...I'm with Jensen-- PLS PLS PLS followup this masterpiece with a Superman installment!! (I'm already imagining how BLISS will take Superman down!!) BRAVO & ENCORE--- :fireworks: THANK YOU 4 your TALENT, Jack!!
4/27/24, 1:08 PM
This is quite well written!
Jensen
4/27/24, 11:01 AM
Wow! Whoa! Damn, your story was hot 🔥! Your story was the figurative bomb 💥! Your story deserves a standing ovation 👏! I crave well done superhero straight to gay, hardcore and all out nasty fiction. You accomplished that and so much more 🤪. Major kudos with a 5 out 5 gold star rating ⭐! Sincere thanks for crafting this amazing story and sharing it with us. You rock, dude 😎! P.S. More chapters, please. You definitely must bitch Superman and Batman 🤩! Those two goodie 2 shoe studs need cocking deep down their throats and rammed up their cunts while wearing their costumes. I can imagine villains cutting into those slutty briefs they wear to access those steamy hero holes 🔪.
Anonymous
4/27/24, 10:14 AM
SUPER HOT BRO!!! I luv your stories where a hot arrogant top daddy gets taken down. can't wait for more :)
4/27/24, 6:06 AM
Is the full story (new chapters) posted on your patreon? please confirm?
Anonymous
4/27/24, 5:17 AM
I'd love for this story to be completed someday.