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8/24/24, 1:36 PM
Waiting impatiently for more
8/24/24, 9:21 AM
Oh man, another exciting adventure!! We finally got a backstory for Ames husband. Oh the intrigue!! (My personal guess is that Mastermind is that Mastermind is either Jinx sibling, or maybe Jimx themselves.... so interesting!) Also, Hunk!! Yayyy, I recognize him. Thanks for giving him a spot in the spotlight, he is so hot and it's a shame he isn't appreciated more. Speaking of, hmm that's another hot hypno scene. I don't know if I mentioned it in another comment, but I love how every henchman has a pet name for Mastermind. It's exactly what I would do, if I were creating a harem of supervillians. I am looking forward to the next episode with barely contained excitement. (Seriously, I dropped everything as soon as I saw you had posted). Anyway, that's all from me for now.
8/24/24, 8:00 AM
After rereading, i think it's an irony that the Wolf King's brothers initially wanted to kill Gil, but it turns out Oh shoot i should put spoiler tag >! It turns out that the originals wanted to kill all Western men anyway, so it's kind of a neat connection

Pcm
8/24/24, 8:24 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Embracing the Primal Beast is not all that bad, isn't it? Of course, Gil has become another bloodthirsty beastman, but his uncles now adore him! I'm really happy to know that someone would go through the trouble re-reading my stories!
8/24/24, 6:52 AM
๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
DMK
8/24/24, 4:25 AM
Loving the control & James's loving of being controlled ๐Ÿ˜
DMK
8/24/24, 1:27 AM
Extremely addictive reading , love it ! ๐Ÿ˜
Sep 3, 2023
8/24/24, 12:10 AM
great story I am straining in my cage reading it.
8/23/24, 11:17 PM
Nice. This is going to be good
Kip
8/23/24, 9:31 PM
This is one of the best stories this site has had in a while. I feel like I know each of these guys and Iโ€™m really invested in what happens to them. Love these pack relationships and how different they feelโ€ฆ and definitely looking forward to the next full moon. ๐Ÿ˜€

8/23/24, 10:31 PM
@[Kip](/user/show/27842) I'm very touched, truly. Thank you for the kind words. Suggestions are welcomed.
8/23/24, 8:24 PM
Wow, captivating and erotic story! Your use of progressive mind control and the resistance from the subject, Javi, is incredibly well-crafted. The way you build the tension and the sexual arousal is masterful. The story is not just about control but also about the exploration of desires and boundaries, which makes it even more compelling. One of the standout elements is how you've managed to create a believable and engaging character in Javi. His transformation from a rebellious, homophobic young man to someone who is open to new experiences is both intriguing and arousing. The way you describe his physical and emotional responses adds a layer of realism that draws the reader in. The pacing of the story is excellent. You take your time to build the scenario, and allow the reader to fully immerse himself in the situation. The dialogue is natural and flows well, it adds to the overall believability of the story. The use of humor, especially in the initial interactions, makes the characters more relatable. The erotic scenes are not just about the physical acts but also about the emotional and psychological dynamics between the characters. The way you describe the sensations and the emotions involved is incredibly arousing. The progression from simple touches to more intimate acts is handled with skill, it makes the story both exciting and satisfying.

8/23/24, 9:42 PM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) Thank you so much Mafisto! You've always been an inspiration to me, so it means a lot to hear these words from you :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: