Recent Comments

Mdlftr
1/25/19, 11:14 PM
Great comedic writing! I love the detail of a "Ken doll crotch" - YIKES!
Anonymous
1/25/19, 11:01 PM
Now, if only we get the rat pack over for more hypnosis...
Anonymous
1/25/19, 11:01 PM
Now, if only we get the rat pack over for more hypnosis...
Anonymous
1/25/19, 10:02 PM
this premise is awesome --spend much more time on the actual transformation as that's the hottest part!
1/25/19, 8:51 PM
Fixed. Forgot about single new lines don't work!
Anonymous
1/25/19, 8:39 PM
hard to read put in paragraph breaks please too much text and no breaks
BigMAss
1/25/19, 7:41 PM
Hot story !! Where do the old boys go when he needs new blood ?
1/25/19, 4:03 PM
Well, everyone, that's the end of the story. I hope you all enjoyed it.
Anonymous
1/25/19, 3:38 PM
Great series!!!
1/25/19, 3:12 PM
Wow - what a cliffhanger!!! And thank you very much for that scene "behind the curtain." I almost stood up and yelled! :) And I so hope that portends future events. :)