Recent Comments

Evan
7/5/20, 10:49 AM
I loved Trials and am delighted to see more work from you. Look forward to seeing where you take it. Thanks for writing!
Flamefox23
7/5/20, 8:06 AM
interesting story, haven't seen an asexual stay asexual before.
7/5/20, 7:45 AM
Mmmmm this was so hot! I love watching straight boys be turned against their will by a ghost they can't stop! Hope there's a part two!
ReadingLurker
7/5/20, 7:26 AM
I thought the ending helped build up Roger's character. Phil said that Stacy was graduating next year, so that would make Roger a second year at least in college plus he mentions he isnt of legal age. He is young and in this chapter mentions he is stressed bc of the workload he has. Add the fact that he is basically messing with a married man and that married man mentions how he never cheated on his wife...i dont know, that would make me feel pretty guilty to the point of tears. I think Jo did really well with this chapter even more because the story thus far didn't have a major conflict.
7/5/20, 7:17 AM
This was absolutely brilliant! I am always so happy to see tickling so heavily used in a story here. I really hope to see more like this with tickling and edging. Thank you for sharing!
7/5/20, 6:44 AM
Well this is just masterfully done.
7/5/20, 6:14 AM
Everything was fine until the very end where everything just felt rushed and he woke him up, kinda out of character to cry like that, that paragraph felt like a patch. In any case, I liked so far... I still want them to be together and Mike as the puppy bitch :P
7/5/20, 5:02 AM
It's a good story! Keep continuous!
7/5/20, 3:38 AM
Loved your storytelling technique in this chapter. Another great job!
7/5/20, 3:18 AM
There's an older gay erotic story out there with a Blair Witch Project premise, but you have done a superior job with character and plot development. I'm originally from Maryland too, so I appreciated the geographic references. Fantastic story!