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5/14/24, 1:48 PM
This was rather annoying to read. The paragraph construction was too similar from each other. The repeated use of "stark reminder" Was too much across the entire thing, really. It would have been nice to see the gradual stripping of the slave's identity but the way you did it made it seem like he's just repeating himself instead of convincing himself (and us) that accepting it was the best way out.

5/15/24, 8:01 AM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) Yeah, this is my first doing a story, so I am learning
5/15/24, 6:55 AM
Wow. I wonder what will happen nexts. Is there like a realization where they see what happen

5/15/24, 7:12 AM
@[Dream maker](/user/show/908635) Stay tuned to find out haha glad you enjoyed :)
5/15/24, 7:00 AM
Stunning! Just stunning!
5/15/24, 1:00 AM
Nice. Another hot story from you. Eagerly awaiting more updates.

5/15/24, 5:44 AM
@[moolah](/user/show/69692) It’s always nice to hear from my readers letting me know that they like what I write. I will get back to my other stories, I just can’t say when but they will be finished.
3/21/23, 6:08 PM
Hard pass on the lefty gender politics. Homosexuality has been a thing for the entire lifetime of our species and it’s still a thing in 2023. Get over it.

Wakeup
3/21/23, 7:08 PM
@[Blank_slate](/user/show/10007593) Uh, what are you talking about?

Anon
5/15/24, 4:43 AM
@[Blank_slate](/user/show/10007593) Fr
5/15/24, 4:21 AM
A really enjoable and creative entry! bravo!
5/15/24, 3:38 AM
🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤
5/15/24, 3:26 AM
Yes!!! This is the chapter I was most excited about!! I can't wait for the next one.
5/15/24, 2:10 AM
The transformation continues!
5/15/24, 2:05 AM
Very hot idea!