Loved this chapter, thought it was extremely extremely hot. Loved Bob going more slutty, bitchy, needy, wanton - so that element is really cool. I like the direction of him being trained into falling in love - that is going to be an interesting story element. (I still am not entirely for him dating Dan, but I do like the elements you are going with.) I am NOT a fan, as a note, of Bob feeling submission towards Michael. The whole daddy son thing is hot but NOT the fact he wants to submit to his crappy son. hehe On Michael and Brad, I am of too minds on that. On one side I LOVED the interaction. Michael obeying was hot, very very hot. On the other side, I don't entirely know if I like Michael falling into submission by obeying someone other than Dan. But yeah, I thought 'stop arguing obey" and Michael doing that was great, really great. Okay, so this might go in a direction you don't want to, lol, but the moment Michael was talking about his bros my mind went to "they need to be tranced by the app into being good gym boys for Dan." hehe Soooo maybe Brad can "keep" Michael, though before that he himself gets controlled so that Dan gets to stay in charge. O the picture, again, two minds. One is that pictures like that are completely fine. Two, well, I don't find that guy that attractive, so its not that it ruined it but it made me go a bit out of the story for a moment. That said, due to the whole nature of the scene and how much a good boy Michael has become I found that really hot. As for suggestions. I think Bob needs to not automatically assume all other alphas are his superior, that maybe its Dan who gets to decide who he needs to serve. This can cut the whole obeying Michael thing. I could see something about feelings and such, cause you hinted at there being more. On Michael, I say Dan needs to make sure he is put into a top position, that its his orders that come first and such. But I can also see something that increasing Michael's pleasure in submission and showing off - something that leads him to stop caring that guys will look at him. (I could also see something leading to him separating a Fag from a Gay Guy in his mind, that is, Gay Men are say dominant and such but 'fags' are submissive straight guys, or something.) All in all this was really hot. Loved the chapter. Loved both Michael and Bob's sections, and also Dan's work to figure things out. PS. Plz more rimming, hehe. :)

GREAT STORY! Can you please add another chapter?

I love this story sooo much.

What an amazing, hot conclusion to this series! I enjoyed it immensely.

There should totally be more to this story, it's hot.

So I think you killed me, I really do. This was such a sexy awesome story. Such a perfect way to end this saga and such. Loved everything about it. The discussion about the mind hack. The nature of the plot. The way that Jese submitted in such a glorious way. The sex, the rimming, the sitting on laps and bouncing, the comments, the well everything. So sexy. So delicious. I really love the plotline. I really love the computer system. Its just so spectacularly awesome. The idea of using a program to hack into someone's mind so that the submission in game flows to the real is just brilliant. So great. So very very great. And again, the sex was awesome. I LOVED the lap bouncing and the rimming and the submission of Jese to Dennis. So great. So perfect.

Love this series so much - can't wait for the next installment!

I live to serve the virus

Damn!!! The game is really flipping on itself and who's the winner is becoming more and more difficult to figure. There is also the fact that Josh still haven't dealt with Bran! Nice return to this story!

Should have guessed it was you who wrote this! Congrats on a well-deserved win!!