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5/9/24, 3:25 AM
You had me at #Mass-enslavement and kept me all the way through. A really strong story.
5/8/24, 9:05 PM
Nice! While I was reading it I wished some of the scenes lasted a little bit longer, the kiss of trust, for instance, or Matt's change of attitude, but in general it was quite enjoyable. Mason's still my fave, but there's a lot more to be seen :grin:

5/9/24, 3:03 AM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Thanks for the kind words! Mason is one of my favorites as well. Chapter 5 will be when Mason has his big moment :wink: I also appreciate the feedback. As the story goes on, I'll get into more detail about each action being performed.
5/9/24, 2:34 AM
Fun transformation!
5/9/24, 2:25 AM
An amazing transformation tale!
5/8/24, 11:05 PM
Very cool second part! I really enjoyed it.
4/29/24, 1:17 PM
Super hot, really fun playful story with a hint of thriller. Love Casey's inner monologue, he's a well realized character. Could use some more lingering descriptions of his body, but there's time for that ;) Really looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for sharing your work!

5/8/24, 11:05 PM
@[tenser13](/user/show/1280137) Thanks for reading! Next chapter is here.
4/20/24, 1:31 PM
More, more, more!

5/8/24, 11:04 PM
@[Pup Vince](/user/show/10023016) Your wish, my command.
4/20/24, 4:34 AM
Oh shit, this is SO GOOD!!

5/8/24, 11:04 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Oh, shit, thank you! :D
4/23/24, 7:50 AM
Seriously this story is fantastic. Idk if we’re going to keep following Ian but that would be SO satisfying given the ending. Overall though, AMAZING and looking forward to more of anything.

4/24/24, 8:04 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Thank you! I've fleshed out this concept as much as I can, but there'll be more concepts to come. What did you like best with this one?

4/24/24, 8:13 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) I like the creeping feeling of embarrassment/humiliation and how it’s all wrapped in an overall pleasant exterior. Nothing is really malicious and it’s oh so satisfying to watch the main character get in way over their head, lol. The way Ian feels as if everyone is staring at him is fantastic. Also love how the change isn’t permanent but it lasts a pretty significant amount of time- and is essentially indistinguishable from actual male pattern baldness throughout that time frame.

Hank
4/25/24, 5:03 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) This story still has a lot of meat left in it. It could definitely use a sequel where Ian goes to the wedding, and he is forced to choose between keeping his mpb secret under the toupee, or taking it off and begging known as male pattern bald to his entire family

4/25/24, 10:16 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Ah yeah, Ian could have stopped at any point, but he didn't for reasons even he doesn't understand. Once it's done it's done, though, and now he'll have to live with it for a good while, and hope his secret isn't revealed.

4/25/24, 10:20 PM
@Hank Which do you prefer?

Hank
4/27/24, 9:52 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) I think it's hotter to see him go to the party with a toupee that looks too conservative for his style, have his brother give him grief and mess with his hair, and while his brother is messing with him, the toupee comes off of his head.

5/8/24, 10:44 PM
@Hank Ah so you like it best if he can't ultimately hide it, and it's revealed to everyone?