Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/25/21, 9:17 PM
Could you write a second chapter? This is such a great story. i love Jafar.
10/25/21, 8:43 PM
Wow, this is great! Keep going!
Jonanator
10/25/21, 7:59 PM
interesting. can't wait for more.
10/25/21, 7:42 PM
Loving this so far. There are some military-ish undertones which I find kind of interesting. Is the plan to pursue that at all or is that just a side effect of the preppy obedience? Either way, great job, can't wait for the next parts.
10/25/21, 7:31 PM
very interesting plot, can't wait for the continuation, dare me more, dare me more :-) I really love the story.
10/25/21, 5:52 PM
Thanks, all. BTW, I just published a revision to this chapter, as I realized to my embarrassment that halfway through, I'd wandered out of 1st person perspective into 3rd person. :)
10/25/21, 3:47 PM
nice sequel definitely enjoyed the work of Swizzington and hope he still plans to finish his follow up.
10/25/21, 3:01 PM
I was a fan of "A Touch of Class," in its original hetero iteration! i look forward to the outcome of this version!
10/25/21, 2:07 PM
I think this is very well-written for a first story, and I'm enjoying it so far. One thing to keep in mind, however, is that part of what makes Swizzington's story work so well is that the primary subject puts up some resistance. I'd also love to see you build upon the intriguing detail that Matt came from a rough part of east London and had already undergone a "preppy transformation" of sorts when he entered Oxford. Like, maybe you could have him chat with some of his mates back home to accentuate just how much he's changing.

PrepDuke
10/25/21, 2:22 PM
@Hypnothrill patience, this is only chapter 2 :P
Anonymous
10/25/21, 2:18 PM
this was a very fun chapter. naturally id love for him to fail haha