Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/22/15, 9:49 PM
great story
Anonymous
12/22/15, 9:30 PM
This should stop, it's getting too violent and dark that murder is almost expected
Ranch
12/22/15, 7:20 PM
Brilliant. I live this story. Please don't let him escape control and abuse!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/22/15, 5:36 PM
“I’m your bitch Azeem. Fuck! Let me be your bitch. You can put it anywhere! I don’t care! Let me make it feel good! I’M YOUR BITCH” So good to be a real Man's bitch! Hot story!
Joey
12/22/15, 5:14 PM
Hot!
rofous
12/22/15, 5:13 PM
omg i waited for 2month i though u stop. unfortunately u didnt .. nice work . really hope ur story can be a real movie or drama ..
Cliff
12/22/15, 11:45 AM
Part 10 appeared and then disappeared... don't know why.
Anonymous
12/22/15, 9:40 AM
GO GO GO!
Anonymous
12/22/15, 7:42 AM
Edlam you are seriously strong. Congrats on the attitude. Honestly we,re not you and can't tell where story is going. So it's a bit premature to cast judgements. However I don't like Alex. I'm still rooting for Jake (although him continuing Alex's changes could be hot). Anyway thanks for treating comments as the constructive criticism they are.
Insignia
12/22/15, 5:05 AM
Sorry it's taken so long guys! Taking exams which are a bitch. Hopefully whoever has enjoyed this work, will continue to get your climaxes from this haha.